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Amayah Ren wrote:: Name: Suiton: Teikokukabe Kaiyōchōseki - Water Release: Imperial Wall of Oceanic Tides
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Purpose: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary.
Element: Suiton - Water Release.
Range: All ranges.
Duration: The wall lasts for one posts, but the water created by it lasts until evaporated.

Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body, particularly the stomach, and is converted into water, and then expelled from the mouth and shaped into a massive wall of violent and powerful waves, which covers a a massively wide range. The amount of water expelled is comparable to that of a miniature lake, being strong and in ample enough amount to easily wash away trees, large boulders, and anyone unlucky enough to be caught in it. The sheer size that it covers makes the technique extremely difficult to either avoid or contain, as the volume of water allows it to easily counter multiple katons of the same rank (up to three) in order for it to be countered, to which even then it would simply evaporate into a massive steam cloud. Add in how many A ranks it would take to disperse this.

Name: Mizumegami no Chokurei: Zettaitōsei - Imperial Decree of the Water Goddess: Absolute Control.
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Purpose: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary.
Element: Suiton - Water Release.
Range: All Ranges.
Duration: Maintainable.

Drawbacks
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Description: A technique that earned Ren her title as the Strongest Suiton Practitioner in History, along with other things, this jutsu allows the user to manipulate any form of water that the users chakra touches, which allows the user to move and shape that body of water to their desire. This essentially gives them control over an absolutely massive amount of water, especially when used on a per-existing water source, such as a lake or the ocean, allowing to them to turn the force of that water against any of their enemies. This can be in the form of gigantic tsunamis, whirlpools, formed constructs, rough waves, and countless other possibilities. I hope you realize the cost this is going to take on your chakra pool.

Drawbacks

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Amayah Ren wrote:: Name: Suiton: Teikokukabe Kaiyōchōseki - Water Release: Imperial Wall of Oceanic Tides
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Purpose: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary.
Element: Suiton - Water Release.
Range: All ranges.
Duration: The wall lasts for one posts, but the water created by it lasts until evaporated.

Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body, particularly the stomach, and is converted into water, and then expelled from the mouth and shaped into a massive wall of violent and powerful waves, which covers a a massively wide range. The amount of water expelled is comparable to that of a miniature lake, being strong and in ample enough amount to easily wash away trees, large boulders, and anyone unlucky enough to be caught in it. The sheer size that it covers makes the technique extremely difficult to either avoid or contain, as the volume of water allows it to easily counter multiple katons of the same rank (up to three) in order for it to be countered. The technique, due to it's elemental advantage, can also cancel out up to two A-rank Katons, and 1 S-rank Katon, to which even then it would simply evaporate into a massive steam cloud that could be used for later techniques.

Drawbacks: add something small here, just because its stronger than normal. Nothing big just a little debuff.

Name: Water Release: Multiple Water Dragon Rainshot Bullets
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Purpose: Offensive
Element: Suiton - Water Release.
Range: All Ranges.
Duration: Maintainable, the water left over lasts until evaporated.

Description: A technique that draws upon the moisture in the air and the users chakra to create multiple heads resembling that of the one belonging to the water dragon, it's a wide spread attack designed to hit multiple targets and absolutely dominate the battlefield. Upon their creation, the multiple heads rain down from the sky like a hailstorm of meteors, crashing into the areas at random locations much like real raindrops would. Their impacting force is enough to cause massive craters, easily shattering solid stone structures and decimating treelines, and scatter several hundred gallons of water in all directions upon impact, making it almost impossible to completely avoid. This description here sounds a lot like the damage and ranking of a low S rank tech at least. i mean, massive craters? shattering solid stone structures? decimating treelines? yea...S rank.

Drawbacks: Indiscriminate direction means this technique is not meant to be used in the presence of comrades, as they are also put in danger of being assaulted.

Name: Mizumegami no Chokurei: Zettaitōsei - Imperial Decree of the Water Goddess: Absolute Control.
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Purpose: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary.
Element: Suiton - Water Release.
Range: All Ranges.
Duration: Maintainable.

Description: A technique that earned Ren her title as the Strongest Suiton Practitioner in History, along with other things, this jutsu allows the user to manipulate any form of water that the users chakra touches, which allows the user to move and shape that body of water to their desire. This essentially gives them control over an absolutely massive amount of water, especially when used on a per-existing water source, such as a lake or the ocean, allowing to them to turn the force of that water against any of their enemies. This can be in the form of gigantic tsunamis, whirlpools, formed constructs, rough waves, and countless other possibilities.

Drawbacks: Considering the high skill and concentration that this technique requires, it demands a faster payment of upkeep for maintaining it. In this sense, duration cost apply every two posts instead of three.

This one is good, has a good drawback for its rank and strength. Good job on this one.

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